who do you want to become in future?

Most people find it difficult to define who they want to become in the future by themselves. ( 1 ) According to me, it’s easy to find out my way. ( 4 )I know who I am, so i know exactly what jobs is suitable for me. I believe that I am really capable of becoming a teacher. Of course, i know some factors needed to be a teacher. ( 1 )
First of all, my mother is a teacher, (5) and she told me many interesting stories( 2 )When you are a teacher ( 5 ), it’s mean that you are a mother, too. You don’t have 1 or 2 sons. You have, at least, 25 sons. ( 1 )How can you become a good mother ( 1 ), i mean a good teacher? ( 1 ) You can’t do this ( 1 ) if you don’t have true love with teaching. ( 1 ) When you desire to teach, it’s a motivation for you to overcome all obstacles. ( 5 )
Secondly, teaching is an interesting work, and it's requiring us to have an enthusiastic heart. ( 5 ) Your job is not only widen knowledge but also show them the way to become a good person. To do that, you should create good learning environment( 1 ) so that students can study more effectively. ( 4 ) Besides, you are the role model to students ( 5 ), you need to do more than just teach. ( 3 )
Finally, wide knowledge is the priority ( 5 ) because it plays an impotant role in your teaching. ( 1 ) However, nobody can know every thing. ( 3 ) You should be willing to learn from students and other teachers. You are a life long learner, too. ( 5 ) By this way, you can explain the lessons in the most through way ( 1 ) so that the lessons become easy to understand ( 3 ), and your students are able to take in everything without difficulty. ( 4 )
That all i know how to become a teacher. Although the differences between images and reality can be completely and disappointing, i’ll try my best to make my dream cometrue


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write about a person whom you admire ( 09 )

In the past, Vietnamese's ideal of beauty had always been a girl with long black hair. ( 5 ) Nguyen Thuy Hien, with a short back hair, had given Vietnamese a new definition of beauty for a new age. ( 2)Thuy Hien was born in a family tradition of sports.( 3) Her parent were athletes. (5) Her manner with all kinds of people was always graceful, particularly for some one who needed sympathies. ( 4)Everyone loves her a lot.( 1) She has studied Wushu( 1 ) since she was 13 year olds. ( 4) She always try her best to overcome all obstacles to success. (3)Each year she seemed to add a new chapter to the legend in the making. Probably, the most remarkable chapter had been written in the 19th SEA Games (3)when she had an serious illness before the competion(1). Her temperature was high, over 39*C during the night. (4) Thuy Hien's skin, normally quite dark, was an alarming color. (5) It was inconceivable (4)that she might play that day. Despite all her illness, she played like the world's greatest athlete. Her victory is worthy. (5) From her, i learn that every human advance or achievement flows from action. If you want to success, it's time to start. Don't waiting any more

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