write about a person whom you admire ( 09 )

In the past, Vietnamese's ideal of beauty had always been a girl with long black hair. ( 5 ) Nguyen Thuy Hien, with a short back hair, had given Vietnamese a new definition of beauty for a new age. ( 2)Thuy Hien was born in a family tradition of sports.( 3) Her parent were athletes. (5) Her manner with all kinds of people was always graceful, particularly for some one who needed sympathies. ( 4)Everyone loves her a lot.( 1) She has studied Wushu( 1 ) since she was 13 year olds. ( 4) She always try her best to overcome all obstacles to success. (3)Each year she seemed to add a new chapter to the legend in the making. Probably, the most remarkable chapter had been written in the 19th SEA Games (3)when she had an serious illness before the competion(1). Her temperature was high, over 39*C during the night. (4) Thuy Hien's skin, normally quite dark, was an alarming color. (5) It was inconceivable (4)that she might play that day. Despite all her illness, she played like the world's greatest athlete. Her victory is worthy. (5) From her, i learn that every human advance or achievement flows from action. If you want to success, it's time to start. Don't waiting any more

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